Try your hand at these exercises on commas
and semicolons based on recent articles on
the Pathfinder mission to Mars by Sharon Begley, "The Stars of Mars,"
Newsweek 21 July 1997: 27-29+, and by Richard Turner, "Who
Needs Astronauts," Newsweek 21 July 1997: 33.
- Click on words after which a comma
should appear in the following sentences or on words after which
a comma has been incorrectly placed (for the
purposes of this exercise). You will receive messages according to
whether your answers are right or wrong.
- As the Martian rover paid courtesy
calls up and down Ares Vallis
last week she showed the exemplary manners of
any ambassador.
- Tipping a bit as she went over
a rock she recovered gracefully
backed up about 12
inches and stuck her spectrometer onto another
rock. (This one is a challenge! More than one comma
is needed.)
- She was given commands by
controllers in Pasadena, California
and then set off on her next visit.
- There is for
instance only one radio receiver on
the Pathfinder lander.
- If it fails the
rover cannot execute commands sent from mission
headquarters.
- Viking
which touched down on Mars in
1976 underwent tests to
see whether its parachutes worked.
- Another cost-saving
move, is to buy more parts off
the shelf.
- Goldin said
"We can tolerate failures."
- "We want to encourage people
to take risks in
spacecraft design" he added.
- Philip Christensen had
to design build and
deliver the infrared camera used
on Pathfinder.
- Scientists knew
that Ares Vallis had
once been swept by a flood but
Pathfinder did find some surprises.
- She analyzed one
prominent rock and she found that
it contained quartz.
- Even as the headlines ebb, people
are still talking about the mission and
their interest has a certain purity about it.
- The atmospheric
conditions for this story, should
have been as inhospitable as those of Mars.
- There are no signs of life no
people no heroic astronauts.
- The scientists, are
the real heroes.
- Even if we didn't quite get what
they were so excited about their excitement pulled
us into the story.
- The cartoon-character stuff got
a bit annoying but it served a public-relations
purpose.
- Click on the words in the following
sentences after which a semicolon should
appear or on words after which a semicolon
has been incorrectly placed (for the purposes of this exercise).
- Our children weren't
always riveted by this story the
scientists themselves were the children.
- The sometimes comic names for
Martian rocks were not intended to "sell"
the story they were
just invented because the scientists have a
sense of humor.
- The media showed little of the
usual cynicism in covering the story, however,
not everything was spontaneous.
- A future Mars lander could make
oxygen out of the planet's atmosphere therefore,
it would supply astronauts with breathable gas.
- Pathfinder is changing the face
of exploration in space; and
it has already changed our view of Mars.
- NASA unexpectedly ordered the
use of better quality equipment; but
the price of the mission was not seriously affected.